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Governments have limited budgets to invest in manufacturers and ameliorate the school’s system. Some people think it is more important to spend more funds on education while others believe that industrial support should take the priority. Why education should have priority over industries will be examined in this essay then I will draw my personal conclusion.

To start with, there are several justifications why financially supporting manufacturers could be more important. firstly, if companies are supported, the human resources might hire more people because the executives may exploit the funds to open new branches and increase the production which is for sure require more employees. As a result, the poverty and crime rate might decrease since the main reason for the crimes is obtaining the money that unemployed poor criminals do not have. Moreover, investing in industries might enhance the gross domestic product (GDP). this is not only because exporting rate might increase, but also the expenditure on low and order decrease. Lower Spending on police because of lower crime rate and the exporting rate increase because of increasing of industrial products.

On the flip side, a multitude of explanations why concentrating on educational support is obviously more crucial. To begin with, excellent schools and universities graduate exceptional workers which leads to outstanding productivity and in the long term high-quality goods. evidently does this contribute to a higher net profit margin while manufacturing the goods from raw materials. Consequently, the companies could grow and expand faster since they have higher revenue. In addition, less money might be sent abroad, and it will recycle locally then strengthen the economy. This is because the companies may not require employing expert foreigners who spend an enormous portion of their high wages outside the county.

In conclusion, it seems at the first glance that supporting the companies more might flourish the economy faster however in the long term, which is the most important, every problem that industrial support tackles, educational support will solve it better than thrive the economy greater.

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